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Updated on
8 February
- Korean
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English (US)
Question about English (US)
1. I took a walk on the way to get my daughter to the daycare center this morning. But today, the air condition was terrible so that I got a stuffy and runny nose again.
2. We went to Mickey exhibition for our daughter last Saturday. But, it was very disappointing because it was too much expensive for adults. There was not much to see and enjoy. Plus, the real Mickey was not there, only Chinese styled Micky was there. My daughter was the only person who was excited because she got a Mickey doll that she wanted.
▶️Do they sound natural?:)
1. I took a walk on the way to get my daughter to the daycare center this morning. But today, the air condition was terrible so that I got a stuffy and runny nose again.
2. We went to Mickey exhibition for our daughter last Saturday. But, it was very disappointing because it was too much expensive for adults. There was not much to see and enjoy. Plus, the real Mickey was not there, only Chinese styled Micky was there. My daughter was the only person who was excited because she got a Mickey doll that she wanted.
▶️Do they sound natural?:)
2. We went to Mickey exhibition for our daughter last Saturday. But, it was very disappointing because it was too much expensive for adults. There was not much to see and enjoy. Plus, the real Mickey was not there, only Chinese styled Micky was there. My daughter was the only person who was excited because she got a Mickey doll that she wanted.
▶️Do they sound natural?:)
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- English (US)
@swtorange127 it sounds pretty good! I would only change a couple things:
“But the air condition was so terrible, I got a stuffy and runny nose again.”
“It was disappointing because it was too expensive for adults.”
- Korean

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