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Does this sound natural ?
Five years ago my family and I visited Varadero. It was not the first time I went but every time I go I enjoy it very much. There are many places to visit, shops, bookstores, two very large shopping centers, restaurants, and an amusement park. We used to walk almost everywhere but we also took the bus for tours around the city. Definitely my favorite place was the beach, with its white sand and giant waves, going there always relaxed me. Those where precious days that I'll always remember
Does this sound natural ?
Five years ago my family and I visited Varadero. It was not the first time I went but every time I go I enjoy it very much. There are many places to visit, shops, bookstores, two very large shopping centers, restaurants, and an amusement park. We used to walk almost everywhere but we also took the bus for tours around the city. Definitely my favorite place was the beach, with its white sand and giant waves, going there always relaxed me. Those where precious days that I'll always remember
Five years ago my family and I visited Varadero. It was not the first time I went but every time I go I enjoy it very much. There are many places to visit, shops, bookstores, two very large shopping centers, restaurants, and an amusement park. We used to walk almost everywhere but we also took the bus for tours around the city. Definitely my favorite place was the beach, with its white sand and giant waves, going there always relaxed me. Those where precious days that I'll always remember
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I think that after visit in the third sentence you could put a : behind it to indicate the beginning of a list. Also in the very last sentence, "where" should be changed to were.
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