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21 Apr 2017
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Does this sound natural?
- When I was a kiddo, I thought Severus was one of Harry's enemy and I really really hated him, but when I finished reading and watching all the novels and films, I realised that he's not Harry's enemy, Severus was one of the bravest and coolest professors that I've seen in my fourteen years of existence. I know that many students in Hogwarts are scared of being sorted into Slytherin, but they don't have to, because being a Slytherin isn't a bad thing. As I end this message I would like to share one of Harry's lines from the films, "You were named for two headmasters of Hogwarts. One of them was a Slytherin and he was probably the BRAVEST man I ever knew."
Does this sound natural?
- When I was a kiddo, I thought Severus was one of Harry's enemy and I really really hated him, but when I finished reading and watching all the novels and films, I realised that he's not Harry's enemy, Severus was one of the bravest and coolest professors that I've seen in my fourteen years of existence. I know that many students in Hogwarts are scared of being sorted into Slytherin, but they don't have to, because being a Slytherin isn't a bad thing. As I end this message I would like to share one of Harry's lines from the films, "You were named for two headmasters of Hogwarts. One of them was a Slytherin and he was probably the BRAVEST man I ever knew."
- When I was a kiddo, I thought Severus was one of Harry's enemy and I really really hated him, but when I finished reading and watching all the novels and films, I realised that he's not Harry's enemy, Severus was one of the bravest and coolest professors that I've seen in my fourteen years of existence. I know that many students in Hogwarts are scared of being sorted into Slytherin, but they don't have to, because being a Slytherin isn't a bad thing. As I end this message I would like to share one of Harry's lines from the films, "You were named for two headmasters of Hogwarts. One of them was a Slytherin and he was probably the BRAVEST man I ever knew."
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Yeah...but kiddo doesn't sound natural
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Yeah but the first section has too many commas. You need some full stops. The sentence is too long
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