More and more wealthy Muslim people are visiting Japan these days. Japanese hotels and restaurants are finally realizing the importance of this market and trying to come up with specially cooked Japanese dishes that follow all the Islam rules. Does this sound natural?

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komorebi

27 Dec 2014

English (UK)

A little unnatural

"and are trying to" - just add in the "are".

Also at the end it should be "Islamic rules".

kiriman

27 Dec 2014

Japanese

Thanks a lot!
So, the revised version goes,
"... Japanese hotels and restaurants are finally realizing the importance of this market and are trying to come up with specially cooked Japanese dishes that follow all the Islamic rules."
Correct?

komorebi

27 Dec 2014

English (UK)

A little unnatural

Yep :)

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More and more wealthy Muslim people are visiting Japan these days. Japanese hotels and restaurants are finally realizing the importance of this market and trying to come up with specially cooked Japanese dishes that follow all the Islam rules. Does this sound natural?

"and are trying to" - just add in the "are". Also at the end it should be "Islamic rules".

Yep :)

"and are trying to" - just add in the "are".

Also at the end it should be "Islamic rules".