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15 May 2017

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After that we went to the sea to take a bath. We had fun a lot. At 5:00 pm we decided to return, but first we stayed in the beach seeing the sunset. Then, we started our trip to home. While my father's friend was driving, the truck skidded to a halt and fell into a ditch. It was horrible because I saw how everything around us was spinning. Fortunately, there was not damage in the car, but my mother's friend hit her head in a part of the car. She spat blood and did not remember the accident, so asked us to tell her what happened over and over again because she inmediately forgot what we said. Does this sound natural?

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