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5 Jan 2015
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I was so full of energy even though I hadn't eaten anything. My friend came toward me in the crowd and banged my forearm joyfully and asked " Did you pass? "
"Yeah! I did. " I said. " I passed too." Said my friend. Then we congratulated each other and went home. That was one of the great moment that I had in my life and I can still remember it. Does this sound natural?
I was so full of energy even though I hadn't eaten anything. My friend came toward me in the crowd and banged my forearm joyfully and asked " Did you pass? "
"Yeah! I did. " I said. " I passed too." Said my friend. Then we congratulated each other and went home. That was one of the great moment that I had in my life and I can still remember it. Does this sound natural?
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- Albanian Near fluent
A little unnatural
*"that was one of the best moments in my life and I can still remember it until this day."
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