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Could you correct my English, please?
I feel like diving to the ocean! Today I ran 10 miles, which I really wanted to make. It was the longest distance to run in a day. It was severe in the last 1 mile even though I kept my running pace slowly. I'm not proud of the record though this is the best as I can do with my current ability.
Could you correct my English, please?
I feel like diving to the ocean! Today I ran 10 miles, which I really wanted to make. It was the longest distance to run in a day. It was severe in the last 1 mile even though I kept my running pace slowly. I'm not proud of the record though this is the best as I can do with my current ability.
I feel like diving to the ocean! Today I ran 10 miles, which I really wanted to make. It was the longest distance to run in a day. It was severe in the last 1 mile even though I kept my running pace slowly. I'm not proud of the record though this is the best as I can do with my current ability.
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It is very good right now but it could sound better if you said it like this: "I feel like diving into the ocean! Today I ran 10 miles, which was my goal. It was the longest distance I've run in a day. It got severe in thr last mile even though I kept my running pace slow. I'm not proud of thr record though this is the best that I can do."
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I feel like diving in to the ocean because today I ran 10 miles and I was determined to finish them. It was the longest distance I have ever ran in one day. It was really hard the last mile even though my pace was slow. I'm not proud of this achievement but it is the best I can do at my running ability.
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It is very good right now but it could sound better if you said it like this: "I feel like diving into the ocean! Today I ran 10 miles, which was my goal. It was the longest distance I've run in a day. It got severe in thr last mile even though I kept my running pace slow. I'm not proud of thr record though this is the best that I can do."
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