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18 Jun 2017
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Could you correct the following diary.
4/30(Sun) In this day, I was going to the one night traveling.
I left by car, when I came to the place where comparatively near from the destination, I suddenly occurred the doubt if the hotel had canceled or not.
Since I was going to go to travel the next month, but I changed the hotel, the name and the price of the hotel was similar to the hotel of this day, so I might have canceled the hotel of this day by mistake.
The hotel agency company send the mails of notice 1 week and 1 day before every time, but I received the notice 1 week before but I didn’t receive the notice one day before.
I came to the quite near place from the destination, I had nothing to do but go on.
I went to the hotel and asked if my booking was hold or not.
After all, my reservation wasn’t there, my cancel record was there.
If my booking was canceled, I was going to go home.
I ate the specialties there and went home.
How stupid I was!
Could you correct the following diary.
4/30(Sun) In this day, I was going to the one night traveling.
I left by car, when I came to the place where comparatively near from the destination, I suddenly occurred the doubt if the hotel had canceled or not.
Since I was going to go to travel the next month, but I changed the hotel, the name and the price of the hotel was similar to the hotel of this day, so I might have canceled the hotel of this day by mistake.
The hotel agency company send the mails of notice 1 week and 1 day before every time, but I received the notice 1 week before but I didn’t receive the notice one day before.
I came to the quite near place from the destination, I had nothing to do but go on.
I went to the hotel and asked if my booking was hold or not.
After all, my reservation wasn’t there, my cancel record was there.
If my booking was canceled, I was going to go home.
I ate the specialties there and went home.
How stupid I was!
4/30(Sun) In this day, I was going to the one night traveling.
I left by car, when I came to the place where comparatively near from the destination, I suddenly occurred the doubt if the hotel had canceled or not.
Since I was going to go to travel the next month, but I changed the hotel, the name and the price of the hotel was similar to the hotel of this day, so I might have canceled the hotel of this day by mistake.
The hotel agency company send the mails of notice 1 week and 1 day before every time, but I received the notice 1 week before but I didn’t receive the notice one day before.
I came to the quite near place from the destination, I had nothing to do but go on.
I went to the hotel and asked if my booking was hold or not.
After all, my reservation wasn’t there, my cancel record was there.
If my booking was canceled, I was going to go home.
I ate the specialties there and went home.
How stupid I was!
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4/30(Sun) On this day, I was going somewhere at night.
I went by car, when I was close to the destination, it suddenly occurred to me. Had my hotel reservation been cancelled?
I was going traveling the next month, but I changed the hotel, the name and the price of the hotel was similar to the hotel I was going to today, so I might have canceled the hotel reservations by mistake.
The hotel agency company sent the letter of notice eight days before, but I received the notice only one week before.
I had nothing to do but go on.
I went to the hotel and asked if my booking was held or not.
But after all, my reservation wasn’t there, my cancel record was there.
Since my booking was canceled, I was going to go home.
I ate the specialties there and went home.
How stupid I was!
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Thank you for your corrections.
'One night traveling' was 'an overnight trip', you don't say?
'One night traveling' was 'an overnight trip', you don't say?
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