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Could you correct the following diary.

4/30(Sun) In this day, I was going to the one night traveling.
I left by car, when I came to the place where comparatively near from the destination, I suddenly occurred the doubt if the hotel had canceled or not.
Since I was going to go to travel the next month, but I changed the hotel, the name and the price of the hotel was similar to the hotel of this day, so I might have canceled the hotel of this day by mistake.
The hotel agency company send the mails of notice 1 week and 1 day before every time, but I received the notice 1 week before but I didn’t receive the notice one day before.
I came to the quite near place from the destination, I had nothing to do but go on.
I went to the hotel and asked if my booking was hold or not.
After all, my reservation wasn’t there, my cancel record was there.
If my booking was canceled, I was going to go home.
I ate the specialties there and went home.
How stupid I was!

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Could you correct  the following diary.

4/30(Sun) In this day, I was going to the one night traveling.
I left by car, when I came to the place where comparatively near from the destination, I suddenly occurred the doubt if the hotel had canceled  or not.   
Since I was going to go to travel the next month, but I changed the hotel, the name and the price of the hotel was similar to the hotel of this day, so I might have canceled the hotel of this day by mistake.
The hotel agency company send the mails of notice 1 week and 1 day before every time, but I received the notice 1 week before but I didn’t receive the notice one day before.   
I came to the quite near place from the destination, I had nothing to do but go on.
I went to the hotel and asked if my booking was hold or not.
After all, my reservation wasn’t there, my cancel record was there.   
If my booking was canceled, I was going to go home.
I ate the specialties there and went home.
How stupid I was!
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