19 Jan 2015

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Jane thought that the lunar eclipse was amazing, because She has never seen it. It looked like a night.

Jane and dad investigated the moom throught the telescope and they took pictures with their camera, because they wanted to remember it.

When the eclips was over, they talked aboutthe solar system while go home . She thought the solar system was great, so she decided to study about the solar system.
Does this sound natural?

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