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20 Aug 2017
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English (US)
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【Can anyone correct and add more details about this topic to my English composition?】
When I was a member of a boy-scout in my community, we took part in the project called “Clean up activity”in this city and also, the other day, we appealed to the people to donate to a fund-raising campaign for the starving children on the street.
These experiences were too hard work for us,but I noticed the strong relationship formed between us and the community,and I was very happy. I felt proud myself, because I think it can have a little bit, but positive effect on society. I noticed many changes I would have missed if I had not taken part in the the projects.
【Can anyone correct and add more details about this topic to my English composition?】
When I was a member of a boy-scout in my community, we took part in the project called “Clean up activity”in this city and also, the other day, we appealed to the people to donate to a fund-raising campaign for the starving children on the street.
These experiences were too hard work for us,but I noticed the strong relationship formed between us and the community,and I was very happy. I felt proud myself, because I think it can have a little bit, but positive effect on society. I noticed many changes I would have missed if I had not taken part in the the projects.
When I was a member of a boy-scout in my community, we took part in the project called “Clean up activity”in this city and also, the other day, we appealed to the people to donate to a fund-raising campaign for the starving children on the street.
These experiences were too hard work for us,but I noticed the strong relationship formed between us and the community,and I was very happy. I felt proud myself, because I think it can have a little bit, but positive effect on society. I noticed many changes I would have missed if I had not taken part in the the projects.
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good but *in the city or our city* would be more better
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oh,thank you👍
then,is there any grammarly mistakes?
then,is there any grammarly mistakes?
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no bro or sis .sorry don't know your gender
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aside from topic
I have a keen interest in Japanese
so,I am also learning Japanese
hope you will help .arigato
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