Is this correct?
It should be translated from the English version to the simplified Chinese. Can someone help me and tell me what is wrong.

朱莉娅是二十二岁，来自曼彻斯特，英格兰. 它是一九八三年出生的今年二十二岁了。朱莉娅的家庭有四口人. 她有一个爸爸，一个大姐姐和一个弟弟。朱莉娅的妈妈和爸爸离婚了, 她的小弟弟正在跟他们的母亲，但朱莉娅不喜欢。茱莉亚从曼彻斯特搬到了伯明翰,
她和她的男朋友，黄鹏搬, 他们会有一个宝宝. 朱莉娅喜欢用她空闲的时间来画, 她梦想成为一名艺术家. 朱莉娅的秘书, 她开始新工作伯明翰坐在十月五日, 朱莉娅期待着它. 黄鹏和朱莉娅必须走出去，今天看到在伯明翰景点. 茱莉亚想要看到图书馆了，她应该买儿童书籍. 黄鹏想要买教科书，他会看中国. 黄鹏是比朱莉娅大五岁, 黄鹏 二十七岁了，是丹麦人。 朱莉娅和黄鹏被男友，朱莉娅在度假的时候. 他们相爱，想要结婚一天.


Julia is 22 years old and is from Manchester, England. Julia was born May 18, 1983. In Julia's family, they are four people, she has a father, one older sister and one younger brother. Julia's parents are divorced and only her little brother is talking to their mother. Julia has moved from Manchester to Birmingham with her boyfriend Huang Peng because she is waiting for a their baby. Julia loves to paint, she dreams of becoming an artist, but she is a secretary and starts working on her new job in Birmingham on October 5th. Today Huang Peng and Julia is going to see attractions. Julia wants to go to the library in Birmingham, she wants to buy children’s books. Huang Peng want to but school book he is a Chinese student. Huang Peng is 5 years older than her. He is 27 years old and is from Denmark. They met each other when Julia was traveling and they have been in love since there. Huang Peng and Julia love each other and want to get married one day.