Please help me to check my mistake in writing English.
Thank you so much.
I really want to practice my writing skill. Let me told about my life in today and I think I will write about my life by English everyday.
Today like a normal everyday. I gets up at 7 o'clock and I brushed my teeth, washed my face and then went to the kitchen to prepare for breakfast with my sister. In the breakfast, we have rice, fried squids with tomatoes and bitter mellon with onion soup and a fish sauce ... I, my sister and sister's lover, we always prepare the breakfast together. I and my sister have separeted to cook in every morning and my turn will fall in even dates . We ate together then went to the office. I'm a officer. I and my sister work in a department. So we work together. I know if I work with my sister we will happen controversy that its effect to our relation . But I will try my best to do my job and talking with her to understand more.
We always talk with each others in the lunch time. We bla bla ... everythings on the world, the work and every person around us. I learn from her more. She is an intelligent person and a good girl. We finish our work on 5.pm and come back home. We have dinner together in our company canteen then we get home and relax after a long work day. I like badminton and I always play badminton around 7 pm with my friends or my collages in every night. It is really a funny time. We laughed during the match. On 9pm I get my home, take a bath, watch my favorite movie affter that I go to bed. I oftens get bed in the midnight.
That's all.
I looking forward to seeing any feedback.
Thanks again.