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English (US)
I am to travel in Scotland in my summer holiday, when I want to see the old castles. Therefore, I would like you to send me the brochure about the main castles. Also, I wonder if you could introduce a good hotel to me. Does this sound natural?
- English (US)
A little unnatural
@Nans: I'm going to travel to Scottland this summer and I want to see the old castles. Therefore, I was wondering if you would send me a brochure about the main castles. Also, I was wondering if you could tell me about which hotels are good in the area.
- English (US)
A little unnatural
"I'm going to Scotland this summer, I really want to see the castles. Are there any brochures about these castles? Could you also help me find a good hotel?" it's better to make it simple.
- Japanese
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