Can you fix my "anger" email please?
- I came to here because since you lost your wife, you kept messaging me that you miss me and everyone. You made me feel sorry for you. You used to me like my real father, and you have my whole faith and love. I would've spend this holiday with my real family and friends if you just told me that you met someone online who from China and may want to get married. Because I don't even like your place. There's absolutely nothing to do here. People are grumpy, the weather suck, and I have no friend to hang out. So after this shit holiday, I will never come back to your place and you will never hear from me and see me again. Because you took a fake love, and lost lots of true loves. You can enjoy right now, but when come to an end, you might will be totally alone.

I'm sorry this is not a fun email and long one.

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21 Dec 2017

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I came here because ever since you lost your wife, you kept messaging me that you miss me and everyone. You made me feel sorry for you. You used me like my real father, and you had my whole faith and love. I would've spent this holiday with my real family and friends if you would've just told me that you met someone online from China and you might want to get married with them. Because I don't even like your place. There's absolutely nothing to do there. People are grumpy, the weather sucks, and I have no friends to hang out with. So after this shit holiday, I will never come back to your place and you will never hear from me or see me again. Because you took fake love, and lost a lot of true love. You can enjoy right now, but when it comes to an end, you will probably be totally alone.
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And I don't mean to stay on the topic, but I'm sorry to hear about your situation. If it helps any, I'm sure you'll be a lot happier away from the person you're emailing.

P.S. your English is pretty good, I wish my Japanese was as good haha.

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21 Dec 2017

I’ll just write down the ones to fix.
1. I came here
2. I don’t understand ‘You used to me like my real father’ - were you trying to say that they behaved as if they were your father?
3. I think ‘you had my whole faith and love’ would be better.
4. I would’ve spent
5. Who is from China
6. Weather sucks
7. I have no friends to hang out with.
8. Shitty holiday
9. When it comes to an end
10. Either you might be totally alone or you will be totally alone.
I hope whatever’s happening to you right now gets better soon.
Do let me know if I’ve made any mistakes, and I hope it helps.

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21 Dec 2017

I came here because ever since you lost your wife, you kept messaging me that you miss me and everyone. You made me feel sorry for you. You used me like my real father, and you had my whole faith and love. I would've spent this holiday with my real family and friends if you would've just told me that you met someone online from China and you might want to get married with them. Because I don't even like your place. There's absolutely nothing to do there. People are grumpy, the weather sucks, and I have no friends to hang out with. So after this shit holiday, I will never come back to your place and you will never hear from me or see me again. Because you took fake love, and lost a lot of true love. You can enjoy right now, but when it comes to an end, you will probably be totally alone.
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And I don't mean to stay on the topic, but I'm sorry to hear about your situation. If it helps any, I'm sure you'll be a lot happier away from the person you're emailing.

P.S. your English is pretty good, I wish my Japanese was as good haha.

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Lalakoi

21 Dec 2017

Japanese

Thank you so much! And thank you for your comment :) This holiday would be sucks a bit, but your message made me feel much better! I bet your Japanese language is good. Japanese language is hard to learn though, I know many foreigners who speak almost perfect Japanese! @samyuuel

Lalakoi

21 Dec 2017

Japanese

2. I don’t understand ‘You used to me like my real father’ - were you trying to say that they behaved as if they were your father?
- I meant he used to be like my father.

It's a huge help! Thank you so much :) Writing down my feelings and knowing that there's someone actually read what I wrote makes me feel calm down. Thank you so much!!
@Tenebrosity