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25 Dec 2017
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my grammar is correct or not? can you corrrect if my grammar is not correct.
Merry christmas Everyone~~!! 🎄 Oh, Everyone are you happy?! it's cold outside so warm place is best 👍🏻 I hope everyone will be a good day and full of happiness~ 🤗🤗❤
my grammar is correct or not? can you corrrect if my grammar is not correct.
Merry christmas Everyone~~!! 🎄 Oh, Everyone are you happy?! it's cold outside so warm place is best 👍🏻 I hope everyone will be a good day and full of happiness~ 🤗🤗❤
Merry christmas Everyone~~!! 🎄 Oh, Everyone are you happy?! it's cold outside so warm place is best 👍🏻 I hope everyone will be a good day and full of happiness~ 🤗🤗❤
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I'd write it as: "Merry Christmas, everyone! Is everyone happy?! It's cold outside, so a warm place is (the) best. I hope everyone will have a good day full of happiness!".
Let me know if you have any questions about my feedback.
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Merry Christmas🎄
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I wish you a Merry Christmas🎄🎅
Is everyone enjoying a happy Christmas? It's cold outside, so warm places are the best🔥
I hope you all have a wonderful day and are full of happiness👼
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"Merry Christmas!" or "I wish you a merry Christmas!"; either is fine. "Is everyone enjoying a happy Christmas?" sounds good, but you could also say "Is everyone having a happy Christmas?". Grammatically "it's cold outside, so warm places are the best" is just fine, although I'd probably be more likely to say "It's cold outside, (so) I hope you all are warm!". The rest is good! :)
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@ninthcloud9
I'm afraid you're mixing me up with the OP.lol
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Yikes, so sorry, you're completely correct! My bad. Apologies! @haku_is_not
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@ninthcloud9
No Problem!
Wish you a Merry Xmas from Tokyo🎅
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