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Could you correct my English sentences below?
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I went to nursery for Japanese class in the church with my daughter.
Absolutely, There are in many Japanese children and teachers. She can't speak English but she can speak Japanese well. So she looked like happier than she was going to English nursery.
We made brownies, play outside and read a picture book.
I could talk about my daughter's condition with Japanese teachers. They encouraged me and gave me some advice.
I have a feeling I will be able to do my best from tomorrow because I had an amazing time today. I hope she feels the same feeling.
Could you correct my English sentences below?
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I went to nursery for Japanese class in the church with my daughter.
Absolutely, There are in many Japanese children and teachers. She can't speak English but she can speak Japanese well. So she looked like happier than she was going to English nursery.
We made brownies, play outside and read a picture book.
I could talk about my daughter's condition with Japanese teachers. They encouraged me and gave me some advice.
I have a feeling I will be able to do my best from tomorrow because I had an amazing time today. I hope she feels the same feeling.
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I went to nursery for Japanese class in the church with my daughter.
Absolutely, There are in many Japanese children and teachers. She can't speak English but she can speak Japanese well. So she looked like happier than she was going to English nursery.
We made brownies, play outside and read a picture book.
I could talk about my daughter's condition with Japanese teachers. They encouraged me and gave me some advice.
I have a feeling I will be able to do my best from tomorrow because I had an amazing time today. I hope she feels the same feeling.
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@Emikojapan I went to the Japanese nursery class at the church with my daughter.
There were many Japanese children and teachers. She can't speak English but she can speak Japanese well, so she looked like happier than when she was going to English nursery.
We made brownies, played outside and read a picture book.
I could talk about my daughter's condition with Japanese teachers. They encouraged me and gave me some advice.
I have a feeling I will be able to do my best from tomorrow because I had an amazing time today. I hope she feels the same.
I'm so glad to hear it. This is wonderful news. 😊🎶
By they way, "daughter's condition" might be a disability, so you may want to say "daughter's difficulties" which would be the problems she's had.
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@Emikojapan I went to the Japanese nursery class at the church with my daughter.
There were many Japanese children and teachers. She can't speak English but she can speak Japanese well, so she looked like happier than when she was going to English nursery.
We made brownies, played outside and read a picture book.
I could talk about my daughter's condition with Japanese teachers. They encouraged me and gave me some advice.
I have a feeling I will be able to do my best from tomorrow because I had an amazing time today. I hope she feels the same.
I'm so glad to hear it. This is wonderful news. 😊🎶
By they way, "daughter's condition" might be a disability, so you may want to say "daughter's difficulties" which would be the problems she's had.
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Thank so much for your help!!
"difficulty"is a good word!
ありがとうございます!!
"difficulty"is a good word!
ありがとうございます!!
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