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I think it's the cabin of a plane, you can tell from the window's shape. The seat seem to be very comfortable, you can lie down during your trip. There also a small monitor, you can watch movie while your journey. The light over there is very gentle, not so shining. I love this place. It definitely a good experience of take trip by plane. Does this sound natural?
- English (UK)
A little unnatural
Plane, you -> plane; you
The seat -> the seats (assuming you have more than one seat) (if there is only one then seem -> seems)
In the second and third sentences perhaps add 'so' after the comma so that it flows better.
, not so shining -> and shines dimly/ does not shine much
And the last sentence should be 'Taking a trip by plane is definitely a good experience.'
I hope that helps c:
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- Simplified Chinese (China)
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A little unnatural
I agree with everything tangerinejelly said, but also use "There is also a small monitor..." or "There are also small monitors..." Instead of "There also a small monitor...".
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