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I met up with my highschool friends yesterday. We decided to meet at meat restaurant called ABC. When we got there there was long waiting line so we waited for 30minutes. We oredered popular menu and enjoyed our meats. It was too hot inside so we moved to another place quickly. We had Soju at a Korean style bar for two place. The final third place was bowling place. Eventhough it was over midnight we went bowling in drunken. I was with my girlfriend yesterday so when we finished gathering I drove my girldriend and my friends home. All of them were drunken except me. I got rid of stress and felt good. #Please correct my English sentences. It's my speaking practice.# Does this sound natural?
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@korean: Wow that's long! Well, to start with, in some English speaking countries, not everyone goes to multiple spots in one night. So 이차, 삼차, etc is not necessarily common. Therefore, we would just say "second place we went to" or more casually "for round two" or something of that sort.
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@korean: I met up with my highschool friends yesterday. We decided to meet at a barbecue restaurant called ABC. There was a long line when we got there, so we had to wait for 30 minutes. We ordered a popular meat dish and enjoyed our food. It was too hot inside, so we moved on to another place quickly. We went to a Korean style bar for the second spot and had some soju. The third and final spot was a bowling alley. Even though it was past midnight, we went drunken bowling. My girlfriend had come out with me too, so after our outing was over I drove her and my friends home. Everyone was drunk except me. It was stress relieving and I felt good.
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Just one idea of how it could be more natural :)
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That would be great! I would appreciate it!
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