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The president of Tokyo prefecture proclaimed "cool japan" as a facinate city which has a long history from edo era. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
"Fascinate city which" should be "fascinating city that"
To get more picky I would also change
"Has a long history from who era" to "has a long history dating back to the edo era"
This sounds a bit more natural I feel.
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- English (US)
A little unnatural
"Fascinate city which" should be "fascinating city that"
To get more picky I would also change
"Has a long history from who era" to "has a long history dating back to the edo era"
This sounds a bit more natural I feel.
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